It rained all summer long
and the few sunflowers
not devoured by slugs
turned their green faces in
towards our windows.
We wiped circles in the
condensation just to see
them beaming at us like
expectant children waiting
for a birthday party to begin.
Don’t ask me to explain
why they are real and
I'm too tired to care
if you believe me
but we are ghost fodder.
When it rains so much
sedge grips your tongue
and words are waterlogged
as air through sodden lungs,
then apparitions come.
A vengeful spirit hacked
them down with a toy sword
because it hurts to be left out
while everyone is having fun.
They lay with broken necks
and giant leaves palm up
the way a good photographer
might document the victims
of a massacre or cyclone,
seeing beauty in despair.
Afterwards it sat alone
in a bare room with
blackout curtains drawn,
pulling wilting petals
from a severed head.
A mere slip of a thing
pale with dark circles
under huge eyes in the
half-light, like a child
cradling a broken doll.
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The only word that to me trips this up is “it” – second word of the last stanza. It grammatically is fine, as referring back to the vengeful monster (I assume) but it does give the reader pause. Otherwise one for the book.
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Thank you x
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had a similar experience this past summer when knuckleheads destroyed my favorite sunflower patch……..thanks https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=07WFxvJf1sU
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There are a lot of unhappy people in the world
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Thank you for sharing!
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Thanks for reading
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